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Duke shfaqur rezultatin -9 deri 0 prej 4
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    Improvisation

    This is a small poetry , respectively this is how I'm feeling in this moment :(


    And the sun shines...

    It's over
    No more destructions
    They're all punished
    God has finally appeared
    What we're expecting?
    It's the last earthquake
    Perhaps it's a happyness
    But it could be so painfull
    Painfull...
    Look behind you
    Someone's smiling
    They'd rather want go back
    Let them countinue smiling
    No more exceptions...
    If you loved Him You're escaped
    And the sun shines...
    People , wake up
    He is powerless
    But don't be afraid of Him
    We are all the winners
    We served Him in the false paradise
    Now we're gonna have a true one
    But everyone will taste the hell
    And got a story to tell
    No more , no more...
    Stop crying your time
    You left it behind you
    Why don't u used it ?
    Does the evil closed ur eyes ?
    You don't even can ask these questions
    Come on, litle creation
    You wasn't more than that
    Lose your patience , is like losing me.
    You already did that...
    And the sun shines...
    Everything is in my hands
    Your turn has finished
    Now the turn is mine
    Who's talking about proprieties?
    The stuborns, pharaons
    Why don't u think
    Why don't u ever do it ??
    The PROPRIETY was never yours
    Even you , yourself.

    Know your creator
    Don't abuse Me
    I give you breath
    And everything in whole
    Who colud ask for more ?
    So , Love me , respect me
    I'll respect u one day...


    This is my first stuff in english :)
    Nėse e shikoni Borėbardhėn nga mbrapa, bėhet fjalė pėr njė femėr qė e kupton ku e ka vendin.

  2. #2
    Catch me if u can c me!!! Maska e invisible girl
    Anėtarėsuar
    10-09-2003
    Vendndodhja
    A very invisible place!!
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    405
    Citim Postuar mė parė nga Virtuali
    This is my first stuff in english :)
    Your first stuff in english is great!
    If u r successful,u will win some false friends and some true enemies; Succeed anyway.

  3. #3
    Perjashtuar
    Anėtarėsuar
    29-09-2004
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    1,466
    i look down but it's dark
    it's all unclear
    but just a glance to the side
    and it's all clear
    it's something uncomprehensible
    is the grass greener on the other side?
    or is it just my perception
    but it can't all be wrong for such a long time
    why does it make sense when i put others under it's analytical gaze

  4. #4
    Citim Postuar mė parė nga invisible girl
    Your first stuff in english is great!
    Thanks , I like your advanced stuff in english :)
    Nėse e shikoni Borėbardhėn nga mbrapa, bėhet fjalė pėr njė femėr qė e kupton ku e ka vendin.

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